THE ARGUMENT.—God,
sitting on his throne, sees Satan flying towards this World, then newly
created; shews him to the Son, who sat at his right hand; foretells the
success of Satan in perverting mankind; clears his, own Justice and Wisdom
from all imputation, having created Man free, and able enough to have
withstood his Tempter; yet declares his purpose of grace towards him, in
regard he fell not of his own malice, as did Satan, but by him seduced. The
Son of God renders praises to his Father for the manifestation of his
gracious purpose towards Man: but God again declares that Grace cannot be
extended towards Man without the satisfaction of Divine Justice; Man hath
offended the majesty of God by aspiring to Godhead, and therefore, with all
his progeny, devoted to death, must die, unless some one can be found
sufficient to answer for his offence, and undergo his punishment. The Son of
God freely offers himself a ransom for Man: the Father accepts him, ordains
his incarnation, pronounces his exaltation above all Names in Heaven and
Earth; commands all the Angels to adore him. They obey, and, hymning to
their harps in full quire, celebrate the Father and the Son. Meanwhile Satan
alights upon the bare convex of this World’s outermost orb; where wandering
he first finds a place since called the Limbo of Vanity; what persons and
things fly up thither: thence comes to the gate of Heaven, described
ascending by stairs, and the waters above the firmament that flow about it.
His passage thence to the orb of the Sun: he finds there Uriel, the regent
of that orb, but first changes himself into the shape of a meaner Angel,
and, pretending a zealous desire to behold the new Creation, and Man whom
God had placed here, inquires of him the place of his habitation, and is
directed: Alights first on Mount Niphates.
tl;dr Satan is on his way to Earth and God sees everything Satan does. An Angel is also tricked into showing Satan where Earth is.
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HAIL, holy Light, offspring of Heaven first-born! | Oh Holy light, | |
Or of the Eternal coeternal beam | ||
May I express thee unblamed? since God is light, | ||
And never but in unapproached light | ||
Dwelt from eternity-dwelt then in thee, |
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you've been here forever. |
Bright effluence of bright essence increate! | ||
Or hear’st thou rather pure Ethereal Stream, | ||
Whose fountain who shall tell? Before the Sun, | Your light has even been here before the sun and | |
Before the Heavens, thou wert, and at the voice | before the Heavens. | |
Of God, as with a mantle, didst invest |
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The rising World of waters dark and deep, | ||
Won from the void and formless Infinite! | ||
Thee I revisit now with bolder wing, | ||
Escaped the Stygian Pool, though long detained | ||
In that obscure sojourn, while in my flight, |
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Through utter and through middle Darkness borne, | ||
With other notes than to the Orphean lyre | ||
I sung of Chaos and eternal Night, | ||
Taught by the Heavenly Muse to venture down | ||
The dark descent, and up to re-ascend, |
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Though hard and rare. Thee I revisit safe, | ||
And feel thy sovran vital lamp; but thou | I am asking for your sovereign and lively lamp | |
Revisit’st not these eyes, that rowl in vain | to shine on me. Although I am blind | |
To find thy piercing ray, and find no dawn; | and I cannot see your light, | |
So thick a drop serene hath quenched their orbs, |
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Or dim suffusion veiled. Yet not the more | it still doesn't | |
Cease I to wander where the Muses haunt | stop me from hearing about and enjoying | |
Clear spring, or shady grove, or sunny hill, | beautiful places. | |
Smit with the love of sacred song; but chief | ||
Thee, Sion, and the flowery brooks beneath, |
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That wash thy hallowed feet, and warbling flow, | ||
Nightly I visit: nor sometimes forget | I'll never forget the fact | |
Those other two equalled with me in fate, | that there are many other | |
(So were I equalled with them in renown!) | blind men in history and in legend | |
Blind Thamyris and blind Mæonides, |
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And Tiresias and Phineus, prophets old: | ||
Then feed on thoughts that voluntary move | who wrote great poetry. | |
Harmonious numbers; as the wakeful bird | The nightingale still sings a beautiful song | |
Sings darkling, and, in shadiest covert hid, | even shrouded in darkness. | |
Tunes her nocturnal note. Thus with the year |
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Seasons return; but not to me returns | The seasons may change | |
Day, or the sweet approach of even or morn, | day turns into night | |
Or sight of vernal bloom, or summer’s rose, | there are flowers | |
Or flocks, or herds, or human face divine; | birds, animals, and human faces which are all so beautiful | |
But cloud instead and ever—during dark |
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but I cannot see any of it. |
Surrounds me, from the cheerful ways of men | ||
Cut off, and, for the book of knowledge fair, | If I cannot see anything, I feel cut off. I feel as though I cannot learn anything | |
Presented with a universal blank | I am blank | |
Of Nature’s works, to me expunged and rased, | ||
And wisdom at one entrance quite shut out. |
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and I feel left out because of my "handicap." |
So much the rather thou, Celestial Light, | So please, oh great light. | |
Shine inward, and the mind through all her powers | Shine upon me and into me so I'll be able | |
Irradiate; there plant eyes; all mist from thence | ||
Purge and disperse, that I may see and tell | to see and tell | |
Of things invisible to mortal sight. |
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about things that people cannot see. |
Now had the Almighty Father from above, | ||
From the pure Empyrean where He sits | Now I am imagining how God must have | |
High throned above all highth, bent down his eye, | felt, high up in Heaven. | |
His own works and their works at once to view: | Looking down at his creation. | |
About him all the Sanctities of Heaven |
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With all his Angels around him |
Stood thick as stars, and from his sight received | like stars | |
Beatitude past utterance; on his right | and on his right | |
The radiant image of his glory sat, | sat | |
His only Son. On Earth he first beheld | his son. | |
Our two first parents, yet the only two |
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God saw Adam and Eve |
Of mankind, in the Happy Garden placed, | who are our first parents, down in the Garden of Eden | |
Reaping immortal fruits of joy and love, | ||
Uninterrupted joy, unrivalled love, | enjoying innocence. | |
In blissful solitude. He then surveyed | Then God looked down into Hell | |
Hell and the gulf between, and Satan there |
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and happened to see Satan there |
Coasting the wall of Heaven on this side Night, | flying | |
In the dun air sublime, and ready now | ||
To stoop, with wearied wings and willing feet, | and getting ready to land somewhere | |
On the bare outside of this World, that seemed | in the far reaches of the universe. | |
Firm land imbosomed without firmament, |
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Uncertain which, in ocean or in air. | ||
Him God beholding from his prospect high, | God just watched, while knowing | |
Wherein past, present, future, he beholds, | all about the past, present and future simultaneously. | |
Thus to His only Son foreseeing spake:— | God then said to his son | |
“Only-begotten Son, seest thou what rage |
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"Ayy look how angry |
Transports our Adversary? whom no bounds | Satan is. | |
Prescribed, no bars of Hell, nor all the chains | Not even the prisons of Hell, the chains | |
Heaped on him there, nor yet the main Abyss | on his body, or the Abyss of | |
Wide interrupt, can hold; so bent he seems | the universe can stop him. | |
On desperate revenge, that shall redound |
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He's obviously looking for revenge, but |
Upon his own rebellious head. And now, | little does he know that it's just going to hurt him and his cause more. | |
Through all restraint broke loose, he wings his way | ||
Not far off Heaven, in the precincts of light, | I can see that he's | |
Directly towards the new-created World, | on his way to Earth. | |
And Man there placed, with purpose to assay |
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I know he's going to try and mess with man and |
If him by force he can destroy, or, worse, | either destroy them or worse, | |
By some false guile pervert: and shall pervert; | trick them and pervert them | |
For Man will hearken to his glozing lies, | with his lies. | |
And easily transgress the sole command, | And you know what? He will succeed in tricking | |
Sole pledge of his obedience: so will fall |
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man. Man will fall |
He and his faithless progeny. Whose fault? | for his lies and be seduced. | |
Whose but his own? Ingrate, he had of me | It will be Man's fault in the end. | |
All he could have; I made him just and right, | I have indeed given Man | |
Sufficient to have stood, though free to fall. | every chance to succeed on their own. | |
Such I created all the Ethereal Powers |
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I gave Man the same freedom that |
And Spirits, both them who stood and them who failed; | I have given the angels. | |
Freely they stood who stood, and fell who fell. | ||
Not free, what proof could they have given sincere | Without freedom, how else could they prove | |
Of true allegiance, constant faith, or love, | their allegiance, faith, or love? Without freedom, they would only be doing what they were forced to do. | |
Where only what they needs must do appeared, |
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Not what they would? What praise could they receive, | ||
What pleasure I, from such obedience paid. | What pleasure would I get from such forceful "love" and "adoration?" | |
When Will and Reason (Reason also is Choice), | ||
Useless and vain, of freedom both despoiled, | ||
Made passive both, had served Necessity, |
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Not Me? They, therefore, as to right belonged | ||
So were created, nor can justly accuse | They were created this way | |
Their Maker, or their making, or their fate, | and they cannot blame me their maker, for their downfall. | |
As if Predestination overruled | ||
Their will, disposed by absolute decree |
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Or high foreknowledge. They themselves decreed | ||
Their own revolt, not I. If I foreknew, | The fact that I knew that this would happen | |
Foreknowledge had no influence on their fault, | has no effect on their free will. | |
Which had no less proved certain unforeknown. | ||
So without least impulse or shadow of fate, |
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Or aught by me immutably foreseen, | ||
They trespass, authors to themselves in all, | They are still | |
Both what they judge and what they choose; for so | responsible for their judgments and actions. | |
I formed them free, and free they must remain | I made them free, and they must stay free | |
Till they enthrall themselves: I else must change |
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Their nature, and revoke the high decree | ||
Unchangeable, eternal, which ordained | ||
Their freedom; they themselves ordained their fall. | ||
The first sort by their own suggestion fell, | ||
Self-tempted, self-depraved; Man falls, deceived |
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By the other first: Man, therefore, shall find grace; | After all this, | |
The other, none. In mercy and justice both, | ||
Through Heaven and Earth, so shall my glory excel; | I will still be merciful and forgive them for the fall." | |
But mercy, first and last, shall brightest shine.” | ||
Thus while God spake ambrosial fragrance filled |
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When God spoke, the air was filled with an ambrosial fragrance |
All Heaven, and in the blessèd Spirits elect | that spread through Heaven which made | |
Sense of new joy ineffable diffused. | all the Angels joyful and happy. | |
Beyond compare the Son of God was seen | The song of God | |
Most glorious; in him all his Father shon | was glorious. | |
Substantially expressed; and in his face |
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And in his face |
Divine compassion visibly appeared, | was full of compassion and | |
Love without end, and without measure grace; | unmeasured kindness. | |
Which uttering, thus He to his Father spake;— | He spoke to his father. | |
“O Father, gracious was that word which closed | "Oh Father, | |
Thy sovran sentence, that Man should find grace; |
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Man will find grace |
For which both Heaven and Earth shall high extol | and both Heaven and Earth | |
Thy praises, with the innumerable sound | will praise you with | |
Of hymns and sacred songs, wherewith thy throne | hymns and songs | |
Encompassed shall resound thee ever blest. | ||
For, should Man finally be lost—should Man, |
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for forgiving the fall of Man. |
Thy creature late so loved, thy youngest son, | ||
Fall circumvented thus by fraud, though joined | ||
With his own folly -! That be from thee far, | ||
That far be from thee, Father, who art judge | ||
Of all things made, and judgest only right! |
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You always do the right thing. |
Or shall the Adversary thus obtain | And we certainly do not want Satan | |
His end, and frustrate thine? Shall he fulfil | to win and further ruin all your hopes | |
His malice, and thy goodness bring to naught | ||
Or proud return, though to his heavier doom | ||
Yet with revenge accomplished, and to Hell |
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for Man |
Draw after him the whole race of mankind, | by bringing down the human race with his | |
By him corrupted? Or wilt thou thyself | trickery. | |
Abolish thy creation, and unmake, | ||
For him, what for thy glory thou hast made?— | Because if Satan succeeds in doing that, then all of Man | |
So should thy goodness and thy greatness both |
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would question you and be |
Be questioned and blasphemed without defense.” | angry with you." | |
To whom the great Creator thus replied:— | God then replied to his son: | |
“O Son, in whom my soul hath chief delight, | "Oh Son, don't worry about it. You are the the | |
Son of my bosom, Son who art alone | only one | |
My word, my wisdom, and effectual might, |
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who has the same |
All hast thou spoken as my thoughts are, all | wisdom and power as I do. Everything | |
As my eternal purpose hath decreed. | you have said is what I've been thinking too. I'm basically just talking to myself. | |
Man shall not quite be lost, but saved who will; | Some men will be saved, | |
Yet not of will in him, but grace in me | if they want to be saved. | |
Freely voutsafed. Once more I will renew |
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His lapsed powers, though forfeit, and enthralled | ||
By sin to foul exorbitant desires: | ||
Upheld by me, yet once more he shall stand | But only because I'd be giving them | |
On even ground against his mortal foe— | the power to fight the evils and trickery of Satan. | |
By me upheld, that he may know how frail |
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Man is frail and weak. |
His fallen condition is, and to me owe | And in Man's condition, they will learn | |
All his deliverance, and to none but me. | that Man needs me. | |
Some I have chosen of peculiar grace, | I may also have a few favorite humans | |
Elect above the rest; so is my will: | that I will choose. | |
The rest shall hear me call, and oft be warned |
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I will also warn the others |
Their sinful state, and to appease betimes | ||
The incensèd Deity, while offered grace | ||
Invites; for I will clear their senses dark | ||
What may suffice, and soften stony hearts | ||
To pray, repent, and bring obedience due. |
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that in their sins they must repent. |
To prayer, repentance, and obedience due, | They will pray | |
Though but endeavoured with sincere intent, | and if they are sincere then | |
Mine ear shall not be slow, mine eye not shut. | I will listen | |
And I will place within them as a guide | and I will give them guidance | |
My umpire Conscience; whom if they will hear, |
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through their conscience. |
Light after light well used they shall attain, | ||
And to the end persisting safe arrive. | ||
This my long sufferance, and my day of grace, | But for those who will not listen, will | |
They who neglect and scorn shall never taste; | eventually | |
But hard be hardened, blind be blinded more, |
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That they may stumble on, and deeper fall; | fall deeper into sin | |
And none but such from mercy I exclude.— | and I'm afraid I cannot give them mercy. | |
But yet all is not done. Man disobeying, | If Man continues to | |
Disloyal, breaks his fealty, and sins | sin and be disloyal, | |
Against the high supremacy of Heaven, |
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against Heaven |
Affecting Godhead, and, so losing all, | ||
To expiate his treason hath naught left, | ||
But, to destruction sacred and devote, | ||
He with his whole posterity must die; | then I've no choice but to kill him. | |
Die he or Justice must; unless for him |
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If I did not kill Man then I'd be killing justice. Justice must be done. |
Some other, able, and as willing, pay | Unless... someone | |
The rigid satisfaction, death for death. | is willing to take Man's place and die for Man. | |
Say, Heavenly Powers, where shall we find such love? | Where can we find such a love? for someone | |
Which of ye will be mortal, to redeem | to become human and redeem all of mankind by offering their life to die?" | |
Man’s mortal crime, and just, the unjust to save? |
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Dwells in all Heaven charity so dear?” | ||
He asked, but all the Heavenly Quire stood mute, | God had posed this question, | |
And silence was in Heaven: on Man’s behalf | but all of Heaven was silent. | |
Patron or intercessor none appeared— | No one stepped up to offer their life to redeem mankind. | |
Much less that durst upon his own head draw |
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The deadly forfeiture, and ransom set. | ||
And now without redemption all mankind | ||
Must have been lost, adjudged to Death and Hell | ||
By doom severe, had not the Son of God, | If the Son of God never stepped up, then all of mankind would have been lost and damned to Hell. | |
In whom the fulness dwells of love divine, |
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His dearest mediation thus renewed:— | The son stepped forward | |
“Father, thy word is passed, Man shall find grace; | "Father, Man will find grace. | |
And shall Grace not find means, that finds her way, | ||
The speediest of thy winged messengers, | ||
To visit all thy creatures, and to all |
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Your godly grace finds everyone. |
Comes unprevented, unimplored, unsought? | ||
Happy for Man, so coming! He her aid | ||
Can never seek, once dead in sins and lost— | ||
Atonement for himself, or offering meet, | ||
Indebted and undone, hath none to bring. |
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Behold me, then: me for him, life for life, | I will offer my life. A life for life. | |
I offer; on me let thine anger fall; | I'll even let you be angry with me when | |
Account me Man: I for his sake will leave | I am a Man. I will give up Heaven voluntarily. | |
Thy bosom, and this glory next to thee | ||
Freely put off, and for him lastly die |
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Well pleased; on me let Death wreak all his rage. | I will allow Death to do whatever to me. | |
Under his gloomy power I shall not long | However, I know that I will not | |
Lie vanquished. Thou hast given me to possess | suffer for long. | |
Life in myself for ever; by thee I live; | You have given me eternal life | |
Though now to Death I yield, and am his due, |
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anyway. |
All that of men can die, yet, that debt paid, | ||
Thou wilt not leave me in the loathsome grave | I know you will never abandon me with Death. | |
His prey, nor suffer my unspotted soul | I will not suffer and I will not be dead forever. | |
For ever with corruption there to dwell; | ||
But I shall rise victorious, and subdue |
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I will rise again. And I will also subdue |
My vanquisher, spoiled of his vaunted spoil. | Death, and kill him. | |
Death his death’s wound shall then receive, and stoop | ||
Inglorious, of his mortal sting disarmed; | ||
I through the ample air in triumph high | I will also | |
Shall lead Hell captive maugre Hell, and show |
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seal Hell |
The powers of Darkness bound. Thou, at the sight | and end Hell's powers. | |
Pleased, out of Heaven shalt look down and smile, | You will be pleased with what I will do, Father. | |
While, by thee raised, I ruin all my foes— | ||
Death last, and with his carcase glut the grave; | I will kill all my enemies and use Death's carcass and seal their graves. | |
Then, with the multitude of my redeemed, |
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I will then redeem and save |
Shall enter Heaven, long absent, and return, | all the souls and take them to Heaven | |
Father, to see thy face, wherein no cloud | to come see you | |
Of anger shall remain, but peace assured | and have eternal peace." | |
And reconcilement: wrauth shall be no more | ||
Thenceforth, but in thy presence joy entire.” |
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His words here ended; but his meek aspect’ | The Son was | |
Silent yet spake, and breathed immortal love | pleased to offer his | |
To mortal man, above which only shon | love and | |
Filial obedience: as a sacrifice | to be sacrificed for the sake of mankind. | |
Glad to be offered, he attends the will |
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Of his great Father. Admiration seized | ||
All Heaven, what this might mean, and whither tend, | All of Heaven admired the Son's offer. | |
Wondering; but soon the Almighty thus replied:— | And then God replied | |
“O thou in Heaven and Earth the only peace | "You are | |
Found out for mankind under wrauth, O thou |
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Mankind's only hope! |
My sole complacence! well thou know’st how dear | I am at ease now and I feel | |
To me are all my works; nor Man the least, | much better. You know how much my work | |
Though last created, that for him I spare | means to me. | |
Thee from my bosom and right hand, to save, | You will be leaving my side for quote a while | |
By losing thee a while, the whole race lost! |
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but as long as mankind is saved. |
Thou, therefore, whom thou only canst redeem, | Only you can save them. | |
Their nature also to thy nature join; | ||
And be thyself Man among men on Earth, | ||
Made flesh, when time shall be, of virgin seed, | You will be magically born from a virgin. | |
By wondrous birth; be thou in Adam’s room |
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You will take Adam's place |
The head of all mankind, though Adam’s son. | as the head of all of mankind. | |
As in him perish all men, so in thee, | Even though Adam messes up and causes all of Mankind's destruction, | |
As from a second root, shall be restored | you will be Mankind's second chance | |
As many as are restored; without thee, none. | for salvation to restore them. | |
His crime makes guilty all his sons; thy merit, |
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Man's crime will make all of his sons guilty |
Imputed, shall absolve them who renounce | ||
Their own both righteous and unrighteous deeds, | ||
And live in thee transplanted, and from thee | but if they live in you then they will | |
Receive new life, So Man, as is most just, | receive new life and be saved and absolved. | |
Shall satisfy for Man, be judged and die, |
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Only a man can stand for mankind so go forth and be judged |
And dying rise, and, rising, with him raise | and then die, and then rise | |
His brethren, ransomed with his own dear life. | up and save everyone that way. | |
So Heavenly love shall outdo Hellish hate, | ||
Giving to death, and dying to redeem, | ||
So dearly to redeem what Hellish hate |
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You can redeem what Hell's hate has done |
So easily destroyed, and still destroys | ||
In those who, when they may, accept not grace. | except for those who refuse your help. | |
Nor shalt thou, by descending to assume | Do not think that because you have | |
Man’s nature, lessen or degrade thine own. | become human, that your glory will be less than before. | |
Because thou hast, though throned in highest bliss |
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Just by |
Equal to God, and equally enjoying | giving up your place in Heaven, where you were equal to me | |
God-like fruition, quitted all to save | it just goes to | |
A world from utter loss, and hast been found | further prove | |
By merit more than birthright Son of God,— | that you really are worthy to be the | |
Found worthiest to be so by being good, |
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Son of God. |
Far more than great or high; because in thee | ||
Love hath abounded more than glory abounds; | ||
Therefore thy humiliation shall exalt | ||
With thee thy manhood also to this Throne: | When you return to the throne in Heaven, you will | |
Here shalt thou sit incarnate, here shalt reign |
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keep your human form. |
Both God and Man, Son both of God and Man, | ||
Anointed universal King. All power | And then I will give you all the power to reign as king | |
I give thee; reign for ever, and assume | over | |
Thy merits; under thee, as Head Supreme, | all | |
Thrones, Princedoms, Powers, Dominions, I reduce: |
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All knees to thee shall bow of them that bide | ||
In Heaven, or Earth, or, under Earth, in Hell. | in Heaven, Earth, and Hell. | |
When thou, attended gloriously from Heaven, | ||
Shalt in the sky appear, and from thee send | You will appear in the sky | |
The summoning Archangels to proclaim |
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when doomsday comes |
Thy dread tribunal, forthwith from all winds | and all of | |
The living, and forthwith the cited dead | the dead | |
Of all past ages, to the general doom | of all past ages | |
Shall hasten; such a peal shall rouse their sleep. | ||
Then, all thy Saints assembled, thou shalt judge |
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will be judged. |
Bad men and Angels; they arraigned shall sink | You will send all of the bad men and angels to | |
Beneath thy sentence; Hell, her numbers full, | fill up Hell | |
Thenceforth shall be for ever shut. Meanwhile | and then you will seal it forever. | |
The World shall burn, and from her ashes spring | The Earth will burn and from the ashes a new | |
New Heaven and Earth, wherein the just shall dwell, |
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Heaven and Earth will |
And, after all their tribulations long, | come. | |
See golden days, fruitful of golden deeds, | ||
With Joy and Love triumph’ing, and fair Truth. | ||
Then thou thy regal sceptre shalt lay by; | ||
For regal sceptre then no more shall need; |
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By then you will no longer have to act as a king, for |
God shall be All in All. But all ye Gods, | everyone will be a part of you." | |
Adore Him who, to compass all this, dies; | ||
Adore the Son, and honour him as me.” | ||
No sooner had the Almighty ceased but—all | All of the Angels cheered. | |
The multitude of Angels, with a shout |
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Loud as from numbers without number, sweet | ||
As from blest voices, uttering joy—Heaven rung | ||
With jubilee, and loud Hosannas filled | ||
The eternal regions. Lowly reverent | ||
Towards either throne they bow, and to the ground |
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All of them bowed |
With solemn adoration down they cast | with adoration. And then they threw down | |
Their crowns, inwove with amarant and gold,— | all of their beautiful golden crowns onto the ground. | |
Immortal amarant, a flower which once | The crowns were decorated | |
In Paradise, fast by the Tree of Life, | with a flower | |
Began to bloom, but, soon for Man’s offence |
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that used to bloom in Eden but after Man sinned |
To Heaven removed where first it grew, there grows | the flower was removed from Earth and brought back to Heaven where it was originally from. | |
And flowers aloft, shading the Fount of Life, | ||
And where the River of Bliss through midst of Heaven | ||
Rowls o’er Elysian flowers her amber stream! | ||
With these, that never fade, the Spirits elect |
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These flowers never fade, |
Bind their resplendent locks, inwreathed with beams. | the angels used them to tie up their locks of hair | |
Now in loose garlands thick thrown off, the bright | ||
Pavement, that like a sea of jasper shon, | Now the flowers were all over the ground, making it look like a sea of green jewels. | |
Impurpled with celestial roses smiled. | ||
Then, crowned again, their golden harps they took— |
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Then they all put their crowns back on and then took their harps |
Harps ever tuned, that glittering by their side | that they were carrying and then | |
Like quivers hung; and with preamble sweet | ||
Of charming symphony they introduce | they started to play. | |
Their sacred song, and waken raptures high: | ||
No voice exempt, no voice but well could join |
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They all began to sing in perfect harmony. |
Melodious part; such concord is in Heaven. | ||
Thee, Father, first they sung, Omnipotent | They sang about God | |
Immutable, Immortal. Infinite, | ||
Eternal King; thee, Author of all being, | ||
Fountain of light, thyself invisible |
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Amidst the glorious brightness where thou sitt’st | and his brightness and how they could only | |
Throned inaccessible, but when thou shad’st | look at him when he was in a misty | |
The full blaze of thy beams, and through a cloud | cloud. | |
Drawn round about thee like a radiant shrine | ||
Dark with excessive bright thy skirts appear, |
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Yet dazzle Heaven, that brightest Seraphim | ||
Approach not, but with both wings veil their eyes. | He was so bright that the angels still had to shade their eyes with their wings. | |
Thee next they sang, of all creation first, | Then they sang about the Son | |
Begotten Son, Divine Similitude, | ||
In whose conspicuous countenance, without cloud |
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who they could see clearly |
Made visible, the Almighty Father shines, | ||
Whom else no creature can behold: on thee | ||
Impressed the effulgence of his glory abides; | ||
Transfused on thee his ample Spirit rests. | ||
He Heaven of Heavens, and all the Powers therein, |
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By thee created; and by thee threw down | ||
The aspiring Dominations. Thou that day | ||
Thy Father’s dreadful thunder didst not spare, | ||
Nor stop thy flaming chariot-wheels, that shook | ||
Heaven’s everlasting frame, while o’er the necks |
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Thou drov’st of warring Angels disarrayed. | ||
Back from pursuit, thy Powers with loud acclaim | ||
Thee only extolled, Son of thy Father’s might, | ||
To execute fierce vengeance on his foes. | ||
Not so on Man: him, through their malice fallen, |
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They sang about the Son's mercy towards Man. |
Father of mercy and grace, thou didst not doom | ||
So strictly, but much more to pity encline. | ||
No sooner did thy dear and only Son | ||
Perceive thee purposed not to doom frail Man | And about his offer to sacrifice himself for Man. | |
So strictly, but much more to pity enclined, |
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He, to appease thy wrauth, and end the strife | ||
Of mercy and justice in thy face discerned, | ||
Regardless of the bliss wherein he sat | ||
Second to thee, offered himself to die | ||
For Man’s offence. O unexampled love! |
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Love nowhere to be found less than Divine! | ||
Hail, Son of God, Saviour of men! Thy name | ||
Shall be the copious matter of my song | ||
Henceforth, and never shall my harp thy praise | ||
Forget, nor from thy Father’s praise disjoin! |
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Thus they in Heaven, above the Starry Sphere, | While Heaven was celebrating | |
Their happy hours in joy and hymning spent. | and rejoicing and singing | |
Meanwhile, upon the firm opacous globe | ||
Of this round World, whose first convex divides | ||
The luminous inferior Orbs, enclosed |
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From Chaos and the inroad of Darkness old, | ||
Satan alighted walks. A globe far off | Satan was walking on the globe | |
It seemed; now seems a boundless continent, | that contained the universe. | |
Dark, waste, and wild, under the frown of Night | It was a dark, wasteland that seemed endless. | |
Starless exposed, and ever-threatening storms |
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Of Chaos blustering round, inclement sky, | ||
Save on that side which from the wall of Heaven, | ||
Though distant far, some small reflection gains | In the distance, some of the light from Heaven could be seen and it seemed a lot calmer than everywhere else. | |
Of glimmering air less vexed with tempest loud. | ||
Here walked the Fiend at large in spacious field. |
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As when a vultur, on Imaus bred, | ||
Whose snowy ridge the roving Tartar bounds, | ||
Dislodging from a region scarce of prey, | ||
To gorge the flesh of lambs or yearling kids | ||
On hills where flocks are fed, flies toward the springs |
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Of Ganges or Hydaspes, Indian streams, | ||
But in his way lights on the barren plains | ||
Of Sericana, where Chineses drive | ||
With sails and wind their cany waggons light; | ||
So, on this windy sea of land, the Fiend |
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Walked up and down alone, bent on his prey: | He just walked alone. | |
Alone, for other creature in this place, | ||
Living or lifeless, to be found was none:— | ||
None yet; but store hereafter from the Earth | Pretty soon this Earth will be inhabited by people. | |
Up hither like aerial vapours flew |
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Of all things transitory and vain, when sin | ||
With vanity had filled the works of men— | ||
Both all things vain, and all who in vain things | This wasteland would be filled with people who lived with vanity | |
Built their fond hopes of glory or lasting fame, | and based their lives on glory and fame. | |
Or happiness in this or the other life. |
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All who have their reward on earth, the fruits | ||
Of painful superstition and blind zeal, | ||
Naught seeking but the praise of men, here find | ||
Fit retribution, empty as their deeds; | ||
All the unaccomplished works of Nature’s hand, |
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Abortive, monstrous, or unkindly mixed, | ||
Dissolved on Earth, fleet hither, and in vain, | ||
Till final dissolution, wander here— | They will all wander in this place, until the final dissolution | |
Not in the neighbouring Moon, as some have dreamed: | ||
Those argent fields more likely habitants, |
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Translated Saints, or middle Spirits hold, | ||
Betwixt the angelical and human kind. | ||
Hither, of ill—joined sons and daughters born, | ||
First from the ancient world those Giants came, | ||
With many a vain exploit, though then renowned: |
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The builders next of Babel on the plain | ||
Of Sennaar, and still with vain design | ||
New Babels, had they wherewithal, would build: | ||
Others came single; he who, to be deemed | Here there would also be | |
A god, leaped fondly into Ætna flames, |
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Empedocles; and he who, to enjoy | ||
Plato’s Elysium, leaped into the sea, | ||
Cleombrotus; and many more, too long, | ||
Embryos and idiots, eremites and friars, | all the philosophers who had killed themselves | |
White, black, and grey, with all their trumpery. |
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Here pilgrims roam, that strayed so far to seek | as well as those who made pilgrimages to | |
In Golgotha him dead who lives in Heaven; | Golgotha where Jesus was crucified. | |
And they who, to be sure of Paradise, | Also there would be those who were confident they would get into Heaven | |
Dying put on the weeds of Dominic, | by disguising themselves as followers of St. Dominic | |
Or in Franciscan think to pass disguised. |
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or St. Francis. |
They pass the planets seven, and pass the fixed, | They would pass the seven planets | |
And that crystal’lin sphere whose balance weighs | and the Sun | |
The trepidation talked, and that first moved; | ||
And now Saint Peter at Heaven’s wicket seems | all the way to St. Peter | |
To wait them with his keys, and now at foot |
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who would be waiting with his keys |
Of Heaven’s ascent they lift their feet, when, lo! | at the gate of Heaven. But once they would arrive at the gate | |
A violent cross wind from either coast | they would be blown away from a violent wind | |
Blows them transverse, then thousand leagues awry, | taking them thousands of miles away | |
Into the devious air. Then might ye see | ||
Cowls, hoods, and habits, with their wearers, tost |
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and their hoods, |
And fluttered into rags; then reliques, beads, | robes, clothes, rosary beads, | |
Indulgences, dispenses, pardons, bulls | ||
The sport of winds: all these, upwhirled aloft, | would become scattered everywhere. | |
Fly o’er the backside of the World far off | These are all the souls that would | |
Into a Limbo large and broad, since called |
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be thrown into a place called Limbo |
The Paradise of Fools; to few unknown | or the Paradise of Fools. | |
Long after, now unpeopled and untrod. | It was all empty at the moment | |
All this dark globe the Fiend found as he passed; | as Satan passed through and | |
And long he wandered, till at last a gleam | wandered around until he saw a distant gleam, | |
Of dawning light turned thitherward in haste |
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a dawning light that made him tread faster |
His travelled steps. Far distant he descries, | ||
Ascending by degrees magnificent | towards a great sight of a | |
Up to the wall of Heaven, a structure high; | wall of Heaven. | |
At top whereof, but far more rich, appeared | It looked so grand | |
The work as of a kingly palace-gate, |
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With frontispiece of diamond and gold | decorated with diamonds and gold | |
Imbellished; thick with sparkling orient gems | and many other jewels | |
The portal shon, inimitable on Earth | and there wasn't anything like it on Earth. | |
By model, or by shading pencil drawn. | Not even a model, drawing, or painting could recreate its beauty. | |
The stairs were such as whereon Jacob saw |
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These are the stairs where Jacob saw |
Angels ascending and descending, bands | Angels going up and down. It was Jacob's Ladder. | |
Of guardians bright, when he from Esau fled | ||
To Padan-Aram, in the field of Luz | ||
Dreaming by night under the open sky, | ||
And waking cried, This is the gate of Heaven. |
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Each stair mysteriously was meant, nor stood | Each step of the stair had their own mysterious secret meaning. | |
There always, but drawn up to Heaven sometimes | This was a special staircase that | |
Viewless; and underneath a bright sea flowed | was sometimes hidden | |
Of jasper, or of liquid pearl, whereon | ||
Who after came from Earth sailing arrived |
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but was revealed whenever those who came from Earth |
Wafted by Angels, or flew o’er the lake | ||
Rapt is a chariot drawn by fiery steeds. | came to use it on their chariots. | |
The stairs were then let down, whether to dare | The stairs were revealed and open at the moment | |
The Fiend by easy ascent, or aggravate | that Satan was there. They were there to tempt him or taunt him | |
His sad exclusion from the doors of bliss: |
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by showing him where he obviously cannot go. |
Direct against which opened from beneath, | Right under the stairs was an opening | |
Just o’er the blissful seat of Paradise, | ||
A passage down to the Earth—a passage wide; | which was a passage down to earth | |
Wider by far than that of after—times | a wide one | |
Over Mount Sion, and, though that were large, |
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that was even wider than Mount Zion |
Over the Promised Land to God so dear, | where God | |
By which, to visit oft those happy tribes, | ||
On high behests his Angels to and fro | would later send his Angels to and from. | |
Passed frequent, and his eye with choice regard | ||
From Paneas, the fount of Jordan’s flood, |
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To Beërsaba, where the Holy Land | ||
Borders on Ægypt and the Arabian shore. | ||
So wide the opening seemed, where bounds were set | ||
To darkness, such as bound the ocean wave. | ||
Satan from hence, now on the lower stair, |
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Satan was on the lower stair |
That scaled by steps of gold to Heaven-gate, | ||
Looks down with wonder at the sudden view | looking down in awe | |
Of all this World at once. As when a scout, | like he was a scout | |
Through dark and desart ways with peril gone | going through darkness and peril | |
All night, at last by break of cheerful dawn |
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only to be greeted by a cheerful dawn |
Obtains the brow of some high-climbing hill, | after climbing a great hill. | |
Which to his eye discovers unaware | As if he was gazing upon a | |
The goodly prospect of some foreign land | foreign land, | |
First seen, or some renowned metropolis | or an undiscovered city. | |
With glistering spires and pinnacles adorned, |
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Which now the rising sun gilds with his beams; | ||
Such wonder seized, though after Heaven seen, | ||
The Spirit malign, but much more envy seized, | Satan was feeling jealous. | |
At sight of all this World beheld so fair. | ||
Round he surveys (and well might, where he stood |
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He stood and |
So high above the circling canopy | ||
Of Night’s extended shade) from eastern point | just looked around, | |
Of Libra to the fleecy star that bears | ||
Andromeda far off Atlantic seas | ||
Beyond the horizon; then from pole to pole |
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taking everything in. |
He views in breadth,—and, without longer pause, | Then | |
Down right into the World’s first region throws | he flew down | |
His flight precipitant, and winds with ease | and he found it to be easy gliding down | |
Through the pure marble air his oblique way | because of the clean air. | |
Amongst innumerable stars, that shon |
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He passed through the stars |
Stars distant, but nigh-hand seemed other worlds. | which were distant | |
Or other worlds they seemed, or happy isles, | but when looking at them close-up | |
Like those Hesperian Gardens famed of old, | they were potential habitable worlds. | |
Fortunate fields, and groves, and flowery vales; | ||
Thrice happy isles! But who dwelt happy there |
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He staid not to inquire: above them all | But Satan wasn't interested in any of them. | |
The golden Sun, in splendour likest Heaven, | He was focused on the Sun which was shining bright like Heaven. | |
Allured his eye. Thither his course he bends, | ||
Through the calm firmament (but up or down, | ||
By centre or eccentric, hard to tell, |
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Or longitude) where the great luminary, | ||
Aloof the vulgar constellations thick, | ||
That from the lordly eye keep distance due, | ||
Dispenses light from far. They, as they move | ||
Their starry dance in numbers that compute |
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Days, months, and years, towards his all-cheering lamp | ||
Turn swift their various motions, or are turned | ||
By his magnetic beam, that gently warms | The Sun's warm beams | |
The Universe, and to each inward part | was able to reach every part | |
With gentle penetration, though unseen |
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Shoots invisible virtue even to the Deep; | of the universe. | |
So wondrously was set his station bright. | ||
There lands the Fiend, a spot like which perhaps | And that is where Satan landed. He was on a spot of the Sun | |
Astronomer in the Sun’s lucent orb | that probably no Astronomer | |
Through his glazed optic tube yet never saw. |
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has ever seen through their telescope. |
The place he found beyond expression bright, | It was so bright. | |
Compared with aught on Earth, metal or stone— | Compared to the metals and stones on Earth. | |
Not all parts like, but all alike informed | ||
With radiant light, as glowing iron with fire. | ||
If metal, part seemed gold, part silver clear; |
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If stone, carbuncle most or chrysolite, | ||
Ruby or topaz, to the twelve that shon | ||
In Aaron’s breast-plate, and a stone besides; | ||
Imagined rather oft than elsewhere seen— | ||
That stone, or like to that, which there below |
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Philosophers in vain so long have sought; | ||
In vain, though by their powerful art they bind | ||
Volatile Hermes, and call up unbound | ||
In various shapes old Proteus from the sea, | ||
Drained through a limbec to his native form. |
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What wonder then if fields and regions here | If the Sun can produce regions, fields, | |
Breathe forth elixir pure, and rivers run | and rivers of pure | |
Potable gold, when, with one virtuous touch, | gold | |
The arch-chimic Sun, so far from us remote, | then it is no surprise that the Sun, which is so far away, | |
Produces, with terrestrial humour mixed, |
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Here in the dark so many precious things | beautiful | |
Of colour glorious and effect so rare? | colorful things on Earth. | |
Here matter new to gaze the Devil met | ||
Undazzled. Far and wide his eye commands; | ||
For sight no obstacle found here, nor shade, |
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But all sunshine, as when his beams at noon | ||
Culminate from the equator, as they now | ||
Shot upward still direct, whence no way round | ||
Shadow from body opaque can fall; and the air, | ||
Nowhere so clear, sharpened his visual ray |
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The air was so clear, that he could see |
To objects distant far, whereby he soon | objects far in the distance. He soon | |
Saw within ken a glorious Angel stand, | saw an Angel | |
The same whom John saw also in the Sun. | ||
His back was turned, but not his brightness hid; | whose back was turned. | |
Of beaming sunny rays a golden tiar |
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He was wearing a golden |
Circled his head, nor less his locks behind | halo. | |
Illustrious on his shoulders fledge with wings | ||
Lay waving round: on some great charge imployed | ||
He seemed, or fixed in cogitation deep. | The Angel was in deep thought. | |
Glad was the Spirit impure, as now in hope |
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This somewhat made Satan excited |
To find who might direct his wandering flight | and he started plotting on how he could get this Angel to direct | |
To Paradise, the happy seat of Man, | him to Paradise. | |
His journey’s end, and our beginning woe. | ||
But first he casts to change his proper shape, | ||
Which else might work him danger or delay: |
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And now a stripling Cherub he appears, | Satan transformed himself into a Cherub. | |
Not of the prime, yet such as in his face | ||
Youth smiled celestial, and to every limb | A young Cherub | |
Suitable grace diffused; so well he feigned. | ||
Under a coronet his flowing hair |
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with flowing hair |
In curls on either cheek played; wings he wore | that was curly and went down to his cheeks | |
Of many a coloured plume sprinkled with gold; | and on his back he had multi-coloured wings | |
His habit fit for speed succinct; and held | and he was holding | |
Before his decent steps a silver wand. | a silver wand. | |
He drew not nigh unheard; the Angel bright, |
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Satan in disguise, flew close and the Angel |
Ere he drew nigh, his radiant visage turned, | turned his attention to the "Cherub" | |
Admonished by his ear, and straight was known | ||
The Archangel Uriel—one of the seven | Satan recognized this Angel as Uriel who was one of God's seven | |
Who in God’s presence, nearest to his throne, | Archangels who stood watch | |
Stand ready at command, and are his eyes |
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That run through all the Heavens, or down to the Earth | over Heaven and Earth. | |
Bear his swift errands over moist and dry, | ||
O’er sea and land. Him Satan thus accosts:— | ||
“Uriel! for thou of those seven Spirits that stand | Satan spoke "Uriel! | |
In sight of God’s high throne, gloriously bright, |
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you're up here watching and standing guard over |
The first art wont his great authentic will | God's creation! | |
Interpreter through highest Heaven to bring, | ||
Where all his Sons thy embassy attend, | ||
And here art likeliest by supreme decree | ||
Like honour to obtain, and as his eye |
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To visit oft this new Creation round— | ||
Unspeakable desire to see and know | I came here to see his creation too! | |
All these his wondrous works, but chiefly Man | I would like to see the creature, Man. | |
His chief delight and favour, him for whom | ||
All these his works so wondrous he ordained, |
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Hath brought me from the quires of Cherubim | ||
Alone thus wandering. Brightest Seraph, tell | I've been wandering around and I would | |
In which of all these shining orbs hath Man | like to know which of these stars Man is | |
His fixed seat—or fixèd seat hath none, | living on! | |
But all these shining orbs his choice to dwell— |
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That I may find him, and with secret gaze | I would like to find him and secretly watch him | |
Or open admiration him behold | or maybe I'll openly admire Man | |
On whom the great Creator hath bestowed | to see and experience the great creation that God has | |
Worlds, and on whom hath all these graces poured; | made on the world!" | |
That both in him and all things, as is meet, |
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The Universal Maker we may praise; | ||
Who justly hath driven out his rebel foes | ||
To deepest Hell, and, to repair that loss, | ||
Created this new happy race of Men | ||
To serve him better. Wise are all his ways!” |
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So spake the false dissembler unperceived; | The lies worked on Uriel. | |
For neither man nor angel can discern | Neither man or Angel can see through things such as lies. | |
Hypocrisy—the only evil that walks | ||
Invisible, except to God alone, | But God can. | |
By his permissive will, through Heaven and Earth; |
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And oft, though Wisdom wake, Suspicion sleeps | ||
At Wisdom’s gate, and to Simplicity | ||
Resigns her charge, while Goodness thinks no ill | ||
Where no ill seems: which now for once beguiled | ||
Uriel, though Regent of the Sun, and held |
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The sharpest-sighted Spirit of all in Heaven; | ||
Who to the fraudulent impostor foul, | ||
In his uprightness, answer thus returned:— | Uriel replied | |
“Fair Angel, thy desire, which tends to know | "Good for you that | |
The works of God, thereby to glorify |
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you'd like to check out God's creation and praise him |
The great Work-maister, leads to no excess | for his work. | |
That reaches blame, but rather merits praise | ||
The more it seems excess, that led thee hither | ||
From thy empyreal mansion thus alone, | ||
To witness with thine eyes what some perhaps, |
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Contented with report, hear only in Heaven: | ||
For wonderful indeed are all his works, | His works are indeed wonderful | |
Pleasant to know, and worthiest to be all | and they are amazing to see. | |
Had in remembrance always with delight! | ||
But what created mind can comprehend |
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Their number, or the wisdom infinite | ||
That brought them forth, but hid their causes deep? | ||
I saw when, at his word, the formless mass, | I was there when there was nothing. | |
This World’s material mould, came to a heap: | ||
Confusion heard his voice, and wild Uproar |
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I saw when God turned the confusion and uproar |
Stood ruled, stood vast Infinitude confined; | into order. | |
Till, at his second bidding, Darkness fled, | ||
Light shon, and order from disorder sprung. | ||
Swift to their several quarters hasted then | ||
The cumbrous elements—Earth, Flood, Air, Fire; |
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Earth, water, air, and fire |
And this ethereal quint’ essence of Heaven | were brought together and then | |
Flew upward, spirited with various forms, | spread out into | |
That rowled orbicular, and turned to stars | the stars. | |
Numberless, as thou seest, and how they move: | ||
Each had his place appointed, each his course; |
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The rest in circuit walls this Universe. | ||
Look downward on that globe, whose hither side | Look down on this globe here | |
With light from hence, though but reflected, shines: | that has all of the light shining on it. | |
That place is Earth, the seat of Man; that light | That is Earth, where you can find Man. | |
His day, which else, as the other hemisphere, |
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On one hemisphere is his day |
Night would invade; but there the neighbouring Moon | and on the other side is his night. There is also the moon | |
(So called that opposite fair star) her aid | which helps to reflect | |
Timely interposes, and, her monthly round | ||
Still ending, still renewing, through mid-heaven, | ||
With borrowed light her countenance triform |
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light from here and |
Hence fills and empties, to enlighten the Earth, | sends it to Earth. | |
And in her pale dominion checks the night. | ||
That spot to which I point is Paradise, | And this spot here which I am pointing at is Paradise. | |
Adam’s abode; those lofty shades his bower. | Where Adam lives." | |
Thy way thou canst not miss; me mine requires.” |
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Thus said, he turned; and Satan, bowing low, | Satan bowed. | |
As to superior Spirits is wont in Heaven, | ||
Where honour due and reverence none neglects, | ||
Took leave, and toward the coast of Earth beneath, | And then he flew down towards Earth | |
Down from the ecliptic, sped with hoped success, |
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Throws his steep flight in many an aerie wheel, | ||
Nor staid till on Niphates’ top he lights. | and landed on Mt. Nipahtes. | |
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ReplyDeleteWONDERFUL. Exceptionally helpful to have the side-by-side translation. THANK YOU.
ReplyDeleteI am UC Berkeley student that found the translations incredibly helpful. But it ends at Book 3 welp!
ReplyDeleteHello all! I apologize for the delay, I'm starting this translation back up now. To this date, books 1-4 should be complete. I've already started book 5. I don't have an ETA for the rest of the books, but I assure you it will get done sooner than later.
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ReplyDeleteThis is an absolute godsend. Finishing off this semester in European Lit with Paradise Lost, and "Lost" I was indeed! Homer, VIrgil, and Dante gave me no real trouble but this one was really getting daunting until I found this. I appreciate you putting it side by side with the original text so that I can use your modern translation when I don't feel like I am getting something. I've shared it with a couple fellow students and it's been helpful for all of us. Thank you thank you!!!!
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